Letter #58: The Glory (Part 2)
Good morning, Erin. All right, no time to waste—let’s get second-halfical on this! Which is definitely about enthusiasm for my commentary and not at all me trying to cover for yet again not having a worthwhile preamble planned! 1. Not gonna bury the lede, here: I was disappointed with the second half. I thought it was a bit of a mess, and I think it would take way too long to explain exactly why—so suffice to say that I thought, after the bevy of loose threads in Part 1, they didn’t follow up on many of the dramatic seeds they’d planted. In fact, I thought they dropped or ignored a lot of the loose threads only to then replace them with all new loose threads in Part 2. 1A. Slightly more specifically, I’d say the second half rushed to get to its ending, which sort of makes the slow (but not unsatisfying) pacing of the first half seem that much worse, since we could have spent less time dawdling with things that didn’t ultimately serve the story ( cough Dr. Go’s revenge cough ...